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Water, so dark and deep
Pills we use for sleep
Fire, so burning and full of life
Or maybe a sharp metal knife
A gun, so deadly and beautiful
Alcohol makes you feel so dull
Love I can't feel
None of my feelings are real
I have become a shell of my former me
Blinded by darkness, I can't see
I have lost my life's spark,
I am swallowed by the dark
From my problems, I can't hide
So why not commit suicide?
But one question remain,
That I can't get out of my brain:
If I took a knife and split my head,
Would anyone weep for me when I am dead?
Pills we use for sleep
Fire, so burning and full of life
Or maybe a sharp metal knife
A gun, so deadly and beautiful
Alcohol makes you feel so dull
Love I can't feel
None of my feelings are real
I have become a shell of my former me
Blinded by darkness, I can't see
I have lost my life's spark,
I am swallowed by the dark
From my problems, I can't hide
So why not commit suicide?
But one question remain,
That I can't get out of my brain:
If I took a knife and split my head,
Would anyone weep for me when I am dead?
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...Beautiful. The simplicity of this is what makes it so wonderful. I feel like I can relate to this, and maybe that's why it created such an impression on me.